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Angry Ookami

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well this is what happens when ookami gets angry! >.> dont do it... this is part 1 of this pic. i wanted to post this pic without the words. :)
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

If you like a critique...here I go...

1. Her hair and her ears are blended together by a singular shade of color. Its not easily readable on first glance. If you offset the colors slightly it would make it quickly identifiable or you can add texture to her ears and tail.
2. The teeth feels flat. If you add a bit of shading to the corners or the upper/lower part of the mouth you can create more dimension to your form and give this image an even more eerie look. If you want to make it really twisted you can add some crimson dark red on the tips for effect.
3. Where her bangs meet her hairline and the folds in her hair (by her red hair bow) needs to be darken in a bit more (preferably in a gradient). This will help create more depth.
4. If you darken her eyes to a warmer black rather than a soft cool black it will make her eyes appear more menacing. This will actually make use of your highlights (which you can lighten a few shades more).

Aside from all this, the creativity put into this overall picture is quite impressive! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>